A poem for my bf... just wrote it off the top of my head... what do you think?

baby please


try to understand


you may not be perfect


but you'll always be my man


you don't need to try


you've already impressed me


baby, you're my future


you're the only one i see


you give me that kiss


that makes my fear go away


you deep in my heart


and you'll always stay


don't fear love


don't fear pain


i'm not going anywhere


we have so much to gain


you treat me like a goddess


but i'm as real as you


i love everything


even the little things you do


i don't need jewelry


flowers, or clothes


i'm overwelmed with that little kiss


you give me on my nose


baby, don't worry


i'm not gonna run


now sit back, enjoy love


and let's have a little fun

A poem for my bf... just wrote it off the top of my head... what do you think?
give it to him. it was cute. he'll like it. but i think you should give it to him after he gives u a kiss
Reply:Nice. Non-traditional which adds to the uniqueness. Very good. A+
Reply:That's cute and sweet.
Reply:i hate people in love its soo gay nice poem though
Reply:Wondeful. Is it not wonderful to think of others and give them kindness....Excellent.. He will love it.
Reply:That was OUTSTANDING! i think that it was real charming!
Reply:umm doesn't sound peom..to me


its more as a letter.
Reply:You're a poet and didn't know it....
Reply:Girl !!! You make ME love you...
Reply:i think you have away w/ words. you go girl. once that poem is from u ur BF.will surely love it. continue writing you've got a magic touch. : )
Reply:awww thats so cute, im sure he'll love it! x
Reply:Very cute. He'll keep it for years.
Reply:I like it! Good job!
Reply:Thats really good! I like to write poems also and its great that you like to write them to your boyfriend! he should write them to you though!
Reply:Very Romantic, he'll like it i'm sure
Reply:cool.
Reply:Beautiful! Also, it sounds as if its from your heart and anything written or stated from your heart, can only be beautiful.
Reply:very sweet... I think he will love it. I wish I were that creative.
Reply:The poem is great, but the structure of it could use some work. Putting it into stanzas will give it a more fluid feel. Obviously you might want it to seem longer...or possibly when you copy + pasted, it came out wrong. But this is what I would do to make it easier to read:








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baby please, try to understand


you may not be perfect, but you'll always be my man


you don't need to try, you've already impressed me


baby, you're my future, you're the only one i see





you give me that kiss, that makes my fear go away


you deep in my heart, and you'll always stay


don't fear love, don't fear pain


i'm not going anywhere, we have so much to gain





you treat me like a goddess, but i'm as real as you


i love everything, even the little things you do


i don't need jewelry, flowers, or clothes


i'm overwelmed with that little kiss -





you give me on my nose, baby, don't worry


i'm not gonna run, now sit back, enjoy love


and let's. . .


have a little fun.
Reply:your boyfriend will love it. Its coming from your heart for sure.
Reply:i love poetry and there have not been one poem that i did not like in some way. this being said i like your poem it states how your bf makes you feel and how you want to be with him.





i write poetry sometimes and the poetry to a loved is so sweet. it shows how much you care about them.
Reply:Pretty Good you've said it all, Nice job.
Reply:awww, cute!!!
Reply:It doesent realy flow so try to read it again and go over what you can mack flow it is good just try that



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