This is a short poem, amybe about realization. Look at it and tell me how was it?

HOPE BUTTERFLIES ARE ON THEIR WAY





When you buy seeds of flowers,


can only guess its beauty,


With first bud your heart starts racing ,


The birth of a beautiful baby.


It blosooms, smelling world.





You water it, like always.


Protect it from predators


you are human, not perfect.





Your baby feel incomplete, not loved


So she doubts her ablities, its beauty.


Maybe she learned diffrent language.


Maybe now its to late.





Only way left is hope,


hope it realise soon,


Beauty is hidden inside,


hope betterflies are on there way .

This is a short poem, amybe about realization. Look at it and tell me how was it?
This is a beautiful poem, and I would try to have it published if you are interested in doing so.





I think I see several spelling errors, so you might want to run spell check on it before you send it out.





The classified section of Poets and Writers Magazine has listings of magazines looking for poetry, and it can be read at www.pw.org.





D.J. Lachance, Milwaukee, WI, U.S.A.
Reply:the thoughts u have put in are wonderful thruout. also i liked how you started and ended. but you can work on the middle part, ther is scope for improvement there.


gud work tho overall
Reply:that was beautiful!!!!!!!!!! i loved it!!! it so speaks the truth. my friend just read it. she liked it to. i have never heard something so sweet as that. i think you should try writing more stuff like that. it would make people think more about life than what is in it.
Reply:Yes, what a nice poem about bad parenting.
Reply:Wow..... That is a great poem.... Way better than mine which isn't really saying alot - according to my poem readers - you should be a published writer!! ^_^


Happy Writing


Satira
Reply:Is metamorphosis a beauty!!! When the time is right, butterflies fly, like an oyster has to go through all the grit and grime in order to finally produce a shiny/cultured/pure pearl.


Butterflies are on their way, so long there's creepy crawlies!





Good poem.
Reply:i am never talking to u again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reply:its lovely and wonderful



nanny