What do u think of this , i wrote it myself? star it if u like, and if u didnt like it can u plz tell me why?

i wrote it for my best friend


this is it:-


if my body disappeared ..


and my name went..


this is my hand writing stay ..


to make u remember ..


forever all the way..


to the person where my heart..


will always stay..


i really wanna say..


that the thing what i know..


that i love u..


i also wanna tell u..


that i lived with u..


the happiest and the sweetest days of my life..


and i always hope a good life for u,,


and plz if u could come back..


plz do that..


cuz i love u..


i need u..


and i cant live without u..


i want u to know that..


ur love is the best thing in my life..


i saw u in my dreams..


i draw u in my imagination..


and i kept u in my heart..


i loved u from all my heart..


and by all the sense of the word..


sweety, i'm writing for u..


cuz of ur white heart..


ur brown eyes and ur black hair..


baby, ur more beautiful than any flower..


u r the most valuable thing in the word..


finally, i wanna say..


ur in my soul and the waves of my blood..


that's it

What do u think of this , i wrote it myself? star it if u like, and if u didnt like it can u plz tell me why?
i like it but u should alter sum of the wording like excluding i draw u n my imagination...n i luvd u frm da bottom of my heart nstead of from all my heart...n u should say baby ur more beautiful n thats da truth...n at the beginning try my bdy went away....minor improvements n itd be better than okay or a gud luv letter itll b a poem with luv as its letter
Reply:a soft touch to the heart
Reply:it is a very good love letter
Reply:it is ok
Reply:Very nice.



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