A love poem for the girl i like?

i know its super long and if you actually read the whole thing i want to thank you. i really want to know what you think of it.





[A Sweet Dream]





I’m lying in my bed


I’m leaning to my left


Stare at a plain pale wall





I close my eyes


I breathe in…


I breathe out…


I open my eyes





Instead of seeing a plain pale wall


I see flowers





I’m lying in a field of them


I’m looking up at a baby blue sky





The suns heat fills me with warmth


The smell of flowers


Is all around me





All of a sudden


I hear rustling in the flowers


Someone’s walking towards me





I sit up


I look around and see no one


So I stand





I turn around


To look behind me


And I’m shocked to see


Her


Standing right in front of me





She looks at me


She starts to grin





I can’t help but giggle


She gives the cutest grins





I smile back at her


As I’m staring into her beautifully colored eyes


And as she stares into mine





I see her mouth


Start to open


Words are about to come out…


Then everything stops…





I can’t feel the sun


I can’t smell the flowers


And the slight breeze


Is now gone





I look at her


She is still as stone


I can’t hear


Or even see


Her breathing





Then a voice starts to speak to me


It tells me


“To The One You Love,


You Shall Speak Only Three.


The most powerful


In all the world.”





Then everything comes back to life


I feel a slit breeze


I can feel the sun


And smell the flowers





She has come back as well


She speaks to me


She says but one word


“Hi.”





I try to speak


Try to say hello


But when I open my mouth


No words will come out





I see her looking at me


With a worried face


She asks me


“What’s wrong?”





I think about what that voice said


“To The One You Love,


You Shall Speak Only Three.”





Three?


Three what?


Words?





“The most powerful


In all the world.”


What could it mean?





The three most powerful words


In all the world


Could it mean the words


I. Love. You.





That must be it


I do love her


I want to tell her


But how?





Well, I guess it won’t be too hard


Since those are the only words I can say





I stand up real straight


I look proud of who I am


Then tears start to stream down my cheeks





She steps forward


Getting close to me


She asks


“Why are you crying?”





I start to wipe my tears


I wipe them till they’re all gone


Then I put a big grin on my face





I shout to her


“I LOVE YOU!”





She looks shocked


And confused


So I speak her name


Very softly





She looks up at me


She’s looking into my eyes


I feel as if she can see


Everything that I am





Then her face starts to brighten


She opened her mouth


Words are about to flow out….





Then I start to scream


I scream and I cry


Because everything is fading





She is gone


Her body has slowly faded


Right in front of my eyes





Everything has gone dark


Everything is gone


Nothingness in every direction





I start to run forward


I’m scared


I’m crying


I don’t know where I’m going





I think out loud


“I HAVE TO FIND HER!


I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT SHE WAS GOING TO SAY!”





I fall to my knees


I see my hands


Starting to fade





I scream


Ever so silently





Then I close my eyes


I breathe in…


I breathe out…


I open my eyes





I’m staring at my plain pale wall


I’m lying in my bed


Its dark





I sit up right


I grin


Then start to laugh





I say to myself


“Maybe its time to tell her


How much I truly love her.”

A love poem for the girl i like?
awwww.... I wish someone would write me a poem like this. she's a really lucky girl, that's all I can say.
Reply:i read the whole thing!!!!


lol





it is soo b-e-a-u-tiful!!!!!!!!!


it is so sweet! near the end i thought it was turning into a very sad poem, until i read the last few stanza's !


it is such a lovely poem and i hope you have told it to that special girl!


and i'm sure she would have been overwhelmed to hear it!!!!!!





i hope the two of you have a long and happy life together!!!!!


you obviously love her a lot!!!!





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Reply:Larxene, it is a lovely poem and you must love your friend very dearly to express yourself so personally, from your heart.


I do hope she appreciates it and can I suggest you choose an intimate and quiet moment to recite it to her ? You really are romantic, so nice.
Reply:Interesting . thanks for sharing your poem .
Reply:I thought it was really intriguing. Awesome =)
Reply:interesting poem. it seems to capture your feelings easily as well as your fears. good imagery and sequencing. I also like the fading of yourself. seems almost like a short story. good job.
Reply:NICE I!



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