What do u think of this , i wrote it myself? star it if u like, and if u didnt like it can u plz tell me why?

i wrote it for my best friend


this is it:-


if my body disappeared ..


and my name went..


this is my hand writing stay ..


to make u remember ..


forever all the way..


to the person where my heart..


will always stay..


i really wanna say..


that the thing what i know..


that i love u..


i also wanna tell u..


that i lived with u..


the happiest and the sweetest days of my life..


and i always hope a good life for u,,


and plz if u could come back..


plz do that..


cuz i love u..


i need u..


and i cant live without u..


i want u to know that..


ur love is the best thing in my life..


i saw u in my dreams..


i draw u in my imagination..


and i kept u in my heart..


i loved u from all my heart..


and by all the sense of the word..


sweety, i'm writing for u..


cuz of ur white heart..


ur brown eyes and ur black hair..


baby, ur more beautiful than any flower..


u r the most valuable thing in the word..


finally, i wanna say..


ur in my soul and the waves of my blood..


that's it

What do u think of this , i wrote it myself? star it if u like, and if u didnt like it can u plz tell me why?
Good poem;


...it's a unique sort of read.
Reply:i like it
Reply:Too long, too repetitious and it seems a little childish since you shortened words that can't be shortened.


Sorry
Reply:And so the death of the English language continues
Reply:Love it, keep up the good writing!
Reply:Why didn't you write it in English - do it again and I'll read it
Reply:A slight bit childish.
Reply:waves of my blood!
Reply:I like it. The words are good...but what I didn't like was how you used just the letter for "you" and "are" instead of typing out the whole word. That just annoys me to no end. And also how you wrote "cuz" instead of "because" and "wanna" instead of "want to" and "plz" instead of "please." Other than that, I think it's a wonderful poem!
Reply:it is OK


check the spelling tho
Reply:It is extremely nice.
Reply:Good, is it to your lover?


Forever love?


To the one who is going to be forever?


why don't you remain, if he could remain.



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